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If you think this should be given a 'mature' rating, just tell me via comment.

You and your wife are both soldiers, both of you, along with the rest of your platoon have been holding your ground in an air-locked underground bunker on a hostile planet, abandoned by your superiors and hunted down by the native hostiles.

Fast-forward eight months later, your wife turns out to have been pregnant before you were both sent to Venus, and now you are on the verge of becoming a father. Medical supplies, food and water are all almost depleted, and your platoon is beginning to question your authority.

Suddenly, good news comes. A radio transmission from a commander in a different platoon announces that there is an armistice between your country and the Venusians. Your platoon celebrates, and you all head to the bunker's air-lock exit.

A transport ship arrives and docks into your bunker. At last, you can go home. You want to leave, live on and raise a family with your wife.

The doors open. You see Venusians... your soldiers wave... and they are greeted with a hail of rockets and bullets. There was no armistice.

Your troops counter-attack, but at the end of the fierce encounter, only two people still breathe.

Your wife's right arm and leg were torn off by a missile, and her right lung has been shot. She's dying from the blood loss, and nobody in your platoon, including yourself, has a compatible blood type. You carry her into the transport, hoping to find a medical kit. You search.You find guns. Food. Water. But the first aid box, the bandages, the sewing kits, the disinfectants, the painkillers... missing.

There is nothing you can do to stop the bleeding. There is nowhere for you to go.

Ash.
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:iconilovewolvesnavonod:
IloveWolvesNAVONOD Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thaaaat sucks...:(
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yourdonebro Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
Anyone else thinking, "Welp, more ammo for me!" Then throw your wife out of the transport as a way of decoy, then GTFO asap. I would do that.
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biocoal Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Nice page, poor girl, I feel sorry for her. I like it.
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ladyXmukuro Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009   Filmographer
ok.
1. grab the nearest knife. i'm sure she'd want the baby to live instead of her and there isn't much medical equipment

2. she's 8 months. full term, the baby will survive if given birth to now.

3. bring her with you and get out before a second firing of bullets. maybe they could save her if you leave quick enough.
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animefan232 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007
Damn. If I was in my wolf form and I approached Venus in my own battle cruiser the Destructor, I'd attack the enemy and then go in and rescue them both from death. I'd also use my powers to heal Ash's wife's fatal injuries.
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LordMordrek Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2007
(Salutes) Semper Fi soldier.
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VauxhaulAstra Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Student General Artist
Maaaannnn that's depressin'.
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:iconmayuzane:
mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Student General Artist
100% intentional.
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:iconaeues:
aeues Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
If I were that place commanding officer I should already kicked her out from that place. Hack why is it has to be like that. Sob..sob...sob I'm not crying okey! Nice. :)
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mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Student General Artist
The moment they landed on Venus, they were stranded :(
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:iconaeues:
aeues Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Oh well nothing I can do then . ^^;
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StarBomber109 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006
Can't wait for the next page (lol, almost exactly what I kept saying for grayless!)
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:iconmayuzane:
mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Student General Artist
And that, my friend, is a good thing :)
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Fiume Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006
Nice stuff. And with a storyline to top it all off!
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Furion001 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bloody.. O.o
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TohruHondaSan Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006
hooo that's wonderfull!
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spetsnazmelayu Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006  Student Digital Artist
reminds me of doom games and the doom movie o.O
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:iconmayuzane:
mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student General Artist
...I hated that movie.

And thanks for faving.
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spetsnazmelayu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student Digital Artist
why? cheesy the rock?
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mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student General Artist
Here's a list, bub:

* The origin of the "demons" is no longer Hell (nor is it implied that Hell itself exists), but rather genetic experiments. Many fans thought this was a cop-out and turned the film into "just another zombie movie". And so do I.

* The idea of whether a test subject becomes a monster or evolves to a superhuman being (like Grimm) depends on whether he or she is genetically good or evil, and that's just fucking ridiculous.

* Iconic weaponry such as the BFG, chaingun and the chainsaw are not used much. The BFG fires only three shots (one of which is off camera), the chaingun fires for about 10 seconds in the movie, and the chainsaw is only used for one scene. A shotgun is only fired three times, and what appears to be a plasma rifle is never fired. The explosion of a BFG round also appeared more like a giant ball of corrosive energy rather than a massive green explosion, as in the games.

* The monsters themselves were inaccurate and/or sparse.

* Failure to capture the tense, scary, and foreboding atmosphere of the game Doom 3 (which the movie is loosely based on) and the run-and-gun action of the original game.

I have more reasons, but I don't want to write a whole novel.
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JD777 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006
Yes! I couldn't agree more!!

But I still loved the movie. That FPS scene was the shiz!
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spetsnazmelayu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student Digital Artist
point damn well taken.. yea youre right when i started comparing it with the doom games <.> it was also kinda more liek Area 51 game to me
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mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006  Student General Artist
Yep.
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:iconjd777:
JD777 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006
Wow. That's a good picture, and a story to back it up.

Great job Mayu! :+fav:
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:iconmayuzane:
mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student General Artist
Thanks! I really took a lot of time working on the blood effects X3
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:iconjd777:
JD777 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2006
And it was worth it!
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backtobeingTeo Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006
Ah, sucks for the main character.
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WereTeen Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006
NOOOOOOOO the baby
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:iconmayuzane:
mayuzane Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2006  Student General Artist
Thanks for favin'
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leveldup Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006
OOOOOHHHHhhhhhhhh.....gorey...
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